amythest_n_ice: (Eternity)
amythest_n_ice ([personal profile] amythest_n_ice) wrote2007-04-03 02:16 pm
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Eternity (Eternity-verse 1)

Not mine, I should be so lucky!!

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Link to prt 2 Surprise

Eternity

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Jack closed his eyes, long lashes brushing against the simple black cloth covering them as he arched his back, the familiar pressure inside his body matched by the less familiar pressure against the barriers of his mind.

"Let me in." A soft voice begged, and at the blunt nudge against his prostate, his shields melted away as he whimpered quietly.

His lover fell still within his body, allowing their minds to twine together, and Jack smiled as he felt them from his lover's point of view, the hot, slick grip of the muscles surrounding his cock.

Then his lover was moving again, and Jack was swallowed by sensation, the gentle pull and glide, avoiding his prostate now until he was whimpering incoherent pleas, there was a soft chuckle, both audible, and in his mind, and his prostate was nailed firmly, making him cry out.

All teasing was done then, the man above him stroking deeply and firmly inside him, hitting that sweet little spot with a regular beat that tore cry after cry from Jack.

They were both so close to the edge, each feeling the others desperate need for climax, but both determined that they would not be the one to carry them over that edge.

There was a soft, gentle puff of breath against his ear, and a soft, gently given command.

"Come for me, my Jack. Come for me now."

Jack cried out, his back arching as he came harder than he had ever come in his life. His muscles clamped down hard on his lover, carrying him over only seconds behind, and both of their orgasms bounced back and forth between their minds, melding and growing in power until they didn't know where one ended and the other began.

Jack must have blacked out for a moment, but when his head cleared, his lover lay heavy on his chest, and both of them were breathing hard. He felt an arm sliding up his chest, and the blindfold was pulled off, making him blink even in the low light of the room where they lay.

"Wow, that was intense." He said, running his fingers lightly through the always messy hair of the man who still lay on his chest. Hazel eyes looked up, locking with his.

"Do you regret trusting me that far?" He asked, carefully easing himself out of the relaxed body under him. Jack groaned a soft complaint at the loss of the intimate contact, but smiled at his lover.

"Never." Jack said, his hands running up and down the slim back. His barriers reformed around his mind, but the thin, golden thread of contact was still between them.

"You're mine now." The Doctor said, kissing his new mate tenderly.

"For eternity." Jack vowed in return, and the immortal human and the near immortal timelord curled together to sleep for a while, feeling the happy, satisfied hum of the TARDIS surrounding them.

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2007-04-05 06:18 pm (UTC)(link)
awwww....great. And also, hot.

[identity profile] amythest-n-ice.livejournal.com 2007-04-05 07:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. Glad you liked it

[identity profile] amythest-n-ice.livejournal.com 2007-04-05 07:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you muchly.

[identity profile] toestastegood.livejournal.com 2007-04-08 02:00 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah. I'm just gonna 'guh' over this fic a little more. It was really, really good.