i am so loving this series, it gives the Doctor a lover and a family without becoming OOC and too sappy. please continue and never end, i don't know what i'd do without my regular dose of Eternity-verse!
One small critisism, it rather jumped from the carnival to the next morning. Perhaps it's worth ending the day, and having Jack a little distracted before getting to the following morning?
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Date: 2007-07-06 07:25 am (UTC)One small critisism, it rather jumped from the carnival to the next morning. Perhaps it's worth ending the day, and having Jack a little distracted before getting to the following morning?
Other than that it's fab as always