oh, im reading this all over again! i loved it the last time, and i love it now. i have to say, one thing stands out now that never did before: the way you deal with reactions. i like how you dont make it over emotional, just raw, hard feelings, the way they would be in real life. not too soppy and not to dry. its brillant. you should be proud of this:)
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Date: 2009-02-17 02:49 pm (UTC)