oh I quite like this

I do love Jack and the Doctor having children

it gives the whole relationship a different sort of chemistry layered over the one of love they already share

and I do love Ianto's involvement with Jack and the Doctor - I do feel sorry for Ianto that he doesn't have a love of his life (or at least not one that isn't already taken)

I also love their interactions with Ianto's parents - specifically his mum

thanks for sharing and I can't wait for more! :D