love, lots of love. I was 'awwwww' -ing through the whole thing. and I hate it when you write and write then you go back read what is was you've just spent the last hour or so writing and you realize it's A. total crap or 2. just doesn't feel/flow/read right. it is one of the MOST aggravating things ever. there are a few dents in my walls proving as much.

hope you figure it out, I have one fic I started writing when I was 13 (I'm 18 now) that that happened with and I still haven't fix to my satisfaction. sad but true.