I've just started reading this and I admit, I'm enjoying it a hell of a lot more than I thought I would, I'm not a sweet and mushy kinda girl so I tend to avoid those fanficss but this one caught my eye and I think it's brilliant.
Jack/Nine fics aren't really common so it's great to see one that as a great idea and writing.

Love how you brought out Nine's temper. That's always something about Nine that I love.

Fantastic, can't wait for the next part.