You had me really worry at the beginning. Like wanting to nibble my fingernails (but didn't) worried for Jack and the baby. A smaller corner of my mind was worried about Ianto and the Doctor.

I'm glad no one (esp. Ianto and the Doctor) was permanently hurt or killed.

Owen really stepped up to the plate and came through in a big way for Jack and the baby. And I love protective-irritated-exhausted!Owen who asked if all the rest of them were through with the yelling. If only the writers had written him like you in the first season then I wouldn't have had to wait until Adam in sn.2 to start to like him.
*claps* Brava. You always do such an amazing job of bringing your characters to life and making the story compelling with romance, angst, and evil cliffhangers of doooooom. LOL.

You are one of only two authors that I eagerly look forward to new parts of your fic, *even though* I know there will be a big 'ol cliffhanger of doooooooom (*snerk* can't say that too often).

I'm bad, but I did enjoy Martha slapping Gwen. And I'm amazed and even a bit glad that Gwen came to apologize.

Yay to the Tardis! She did her part well.

Ooh, and you wrote an epilogue. I suppose that plus this wonderful ending. *hughug*