Oh, you have sooooo redeemed yourself. LOL This was an incredible chapter. Beautiful and heartbreaking. Poor Jack, to have to go through trauma like that - thinking his partners were dead, and then dying himself so painfully so the baby could be saved. I can imagine him doing that in the show, as well. He really is a true hero.
Love the Gwen-bashing, too! Martha slapping her down, literally! Brilliant, absolutely brilliant.
This has been a fantastic story, and I'll be sorry when it ends, but it's been an absolute joy to read. I'll be looking forward to the epilogue, and hopefully more before too long of Eternity-Verse... (hint!)